From b78413c4885abb9a3f127b303974b9b2881d8be0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jim Hague <jim.hague@acm.org>
Date: Mon, 8 Jul 2013 10:35:23 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Revise intro wording on documents and website.

---
 dottes.tex     |  6 +++---
 web/index.html | 25 +++++++++++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/dottes.tex b/dottes.tex
index 57ce02b..e794fcc 100644
--- a/dottes.tex
+++ b/dottes.tex
@@ -108,9 +108,9 @@ anniversary in 2013.
 
 \chapter{Introduction}
 
-After every practice or dance-out, the musicians of Cry Havoc Botley
-Morris like to have a little music-playing session. And, of course,
-the musicians provide the music we dance to.
+Music forms a core part of Cry Havoc Botley Morris. Of course, the
+musicians provide the music we dance to. And after every practice or
+dance-out, there is a music-playing session.
 
 Havoc musicians come in all shades of experience and ability.
 This collection is intended to help those like me who are inexpert with
diff --git a/web/index.html b/web/index.html
index 8bb45ca..0484f72 100644
--- a/web/index.html
+++ b/web/index.html
@@ -21,8 +21,9 @@
 
     <div class="grid_12 dottes-body">
       <h1>The music of Cry Havoc, a reference.</h1>
-      <p>After every practice or dance-out, the musicians of Cry Havoc
-        Botley Morris like to have a little music-playing session.
+      <p>Music forms a core part of Cry Havoc Botley Morris. Of course, the
+        musicians provide the music we dance to. And after every practice or
+        dance-out, there is a music-playing session.
       <p>Havoc musicians come in all shades of experience and ability.
         This collection is intended to help those like me who are inexpert with
         instrument and folk music generally, but have a little musical
@@ -32,12 +33,19 @@
         played at Havoc sessions. I'm in no way suggesting that they are
         in any way <em>correct</em>. This is just how we go about them.</p>
       <p>The tunes we play tend to vary over time. So this collection is
-        not static, but will change over time. I'll probably not delete tunes,
-        but at some stage may get round to marking some as less used.</p>
-      <p>All tunes are believed to be in the public domain, or at the
-        very least enjoy widespread currency on the folk music scene. If I have
-        inadvertantly transgressed on anyone's copyright, please contact me at
-        the address below and I will remove the offending tune.
+        not static, but will change over time. Lesser used tunes, or simply
+        tunes that I like but are not in general Havoc currency, are in
+        the Library collection.</p>
+      <p>The majority of tunes here have no identifiable author, and
+        are unquestionably in the public domain. Rather than litter the
+        pages with <em>Trad.</em> or <em>Anon.</em>, I have left them
+        unattributed. Some, however, have an identifiable author or
+        arranger and copyright unquestionably remains with that person.
+        I believe these tunes to enjoy widespread currency on the folk
+        music scene, and therefore there is at least tacit approval by
+        the authors for their dissemination. If this is not the case,
+        please contact me at the address below and I will remove the
+        offending tune.
       <div class="dottes-container">
         <div class="dottes-transpose-instrument">
           <div class="dottes-transpose-instrument-item dottes-transpose-instrument-name">
@@ -124,6 +132,7 @@
              src="http://i.creativecommons.org/l/by-sa/2.0/uk/88x31.png"/>
       </a>
       <br />
+      The collection of tunes that is
       <span xmlns:dct="http://purl.org/dc/terms/"
             property="dct:title">Ye Crie Havock Booke of Dottes</span>
       by <a xmlns:cc="http://creativecommons.org/ns#"